He's Just Playing Wiggle Puppy

Finished the blindness story yesterday, adding another 450 words, but I've decided to hold onto it for another day before I submit it. The version I've got is very rough, and I wanted to have another look at it tomorrow night to see if I can spot anything obviously wrong with it. If I can get a headstart on the inevitable comments of 'passive voice is not your friend' and 'this is too long' then maybe I could turn this piece into a halfway decent story.

The story's called Tymmy, named for the cat we had to have put to sleep this summer. In case anyone's curious about the strange spelling, I made a typo the first time I was spelling Timmy and I just liked the look of it. I shall probably change it.

I also critted, but the piece I looked at seems to have vanished from the workshop. Grr.

Later . . .